Her legs never work.
Rolling,
Her mind is never still.
So in this state of perpendicular feelings
She begins to wonder how she has gotten here.
Her actions are...
none
but her thoughts are
unmatched.
Often times she feels as if she is at the top
only to find that she is trapped
The descent down to reality is more of a
Reluctant
drag
She holds some beauty,
hidden in the silence
can she be found?
Most likely she can not
she watches the fake smiles
and she watches the fake hand shakes
?fake be she does how but
Her worst enemy is the opposite
This girl,
is gorgeous.
Perfect teeth which compliment her bright blue eyes
But lying beneath, her angel has died.
Replaced by a demon
instilled from birth.
Proud of her money
and disgusted by her surrounding
*peasants*
poor neighbors
You see these 2 girls clash but
girl one doesn't understand WHY
she is okay though,
she can see the way people look in her eyes
and she knows that they know she "knows"
and they can not do anything about it.
Oldham County
is a very two sided county. In some areas the land is bare and is filled with
disgusting, poorly kept farms. In other areas, the land is filled with million dollar
houses and the roads are filled with Nissan GTRs and Audis. For the most part,
everyone gets along regardless of economic status. My county is a pretty generic,
low crime, good-to-raise your kid in county so I decided to focus on the rare,
more dramatic aspects. There are certain groups of people that are considered
to separate solely because of the socio economic statuses they wear. I am not
sure if the poorer people are mad at the more wealthy people because they do
not have as much money, or if the rich people are mad at the poor people because
they just realized that money cannot buy happiness. Maybe both. Regardless of
the reasoning behind the distinction, it was silly and unnecessary. I was lucky
enough to be friends with everyone but close enough to hear about all of the
drama. My friends on the poorer side of the county always had a unique type of
intelligence that wasn’t always reflected in school work, as seen in girl one.
My friends on the more wealthy side of the county drove nice cars and got great
grades, as reflected in the second girl. (Keep in mind this is over
dramatized). Sometimes I could see teachers automatically give the wealthy kids
more praise for an act than would be given to an un wealthy kid. The poem is attempting
to reflect my memories of certain people’s reaction to being ignored. I think
that after a while of being ignored, a person will naturally become quiet. If
this person becomes quiet, their intelligence is not lost, as reflected in the
ending of the poem.
I really like this poem about your “two-sided” hometown. It made me feel the tension between girl one (poor girl) and girl two (rich girl). Your poem made me feel that your hometown may be one where your value and popularity status is based on your wealth, which I can relate to. It seems like everyone within your community has certain expectancy based on socio-economic status and whom you know. It sounds as if this town is very unfair to people with less money and only acknowledges your existence if you are wealthy! I enjoyed reading your poem because it reminds me of my hometown!
ReplyDeleteI always enjoy reading your posts. You never really hold back on your language or topics and you always use strong words. For example when you used the word peasants you exemplified just how much some of them can hate each other. I believe that a lot of area around the nation can relate to this kind of class warfare. This also ties into a lot of our class topics being that class warfare is one of our biggest discussions and one of the main points of our books.
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